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please just check and make any correction if i did any mistakes I’ll give 10 points for the best correction
please just check and make any correction if i did any mistakes I’ll give 10 points for the best correction
Yet people continue to believe that sun exposure is bad for health. Warnings about the dangers of the sun are starker than ever, and skin cancer is now the most commonly diagnosed cancer. Experts at Cancer Research UK fear that rates of melanoma, the most serious form, are likely to treble in the next 30 years. Furthermore Most dermatologists believe that no amount of sun exposure is safe because sunlight damages DNA of skin cells and kills them causing premature aging of the skin.
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June 18th, 2011 at 1:30 am
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Warnings…are more bleak than ever.
Furthermore, most…
sunlight damages DNA in skin cells…kills them, causing
Otherwise, very well written!
June 19th, 2011 at 8:02 pm
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If you stick to the old rules, you’d know you can’t start a sentence with “yet” (although that rule is changing nowadays)…treble? Please clarify, or use another word. Also you accidentally capitalized “Most”, so use lowercase m instead. And put a comma after “kills them”. Other than that it’s a good, concise paragraph!
June 23rd, 2011 at 1:03 am
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Yet people continue to believe that sun exposure is bad for their health. Warnings about the dangers of the sun are starker than ever, and skin cancer is now the most commonly diagnosed cancer. Experts at the Cancer Research UK fear that the rate of the increase in melanoma, the most serious form, are likely to treble in the next 30 years. Furthermore, most dermatologists believe that no amount of sun exposure is safe, because sunlight damages the DNA of skin cells and kills them, causing premature aging of the skin.